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Lost
Anybody from RKRA has seen this before but not alll of you are from there so I''ll post it. Please critique.This is the first part. The second part wasn't any ...
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Ignore this one: read Gone Away Home(i changed it)
i reposted it, so ignore this topic.
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Gone Away Home( I changed it)
Yeah it's a lot different than before because if someone tells me something's wrong with it,I edit like crazy. Anyway, please critique... or else lol: A thick cloud of ash ...
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Gone Away Home: edited Chapter One
I finally finished editing. I took a break from it; so it took a little long. So yeah, finally. Please critique and rate.: A thick cloud of ash poured into ...
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Gone Away Home: Chapter Two
Yeah. Here it is. So critique and rate.: Deidre coughed as the ash surrounded her. “This is like a replay of what just happened at my house!” Deidre screamed, struggling ...
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New Story!(chapter one)
I posted this on my other forum but nobody's critiqued it yet, so please critique it. anyway, it's actually Gone Away Home but I've posted it a million times, so ...
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A little something I've been writing while I was gone...
I don't know if this is going to be fantasy or realistic fiction or if I'm even going to finish this. I know it's not that good but it's just ...