Vivian

Alright, cool. Was I right on the overall message of the poem?

Cool, thank you. (Adds to her list of interesting symbols).

get the question mark and the exclamation mark together like that.

How the heck did you do that?

This story means so much to me right now. This woman is the best mother in the world, her husband can die though. But the mom I love, I would ...

I'm done. Just done. I wasn't expecting that ending, thanks for making me smile.

Nice view point. I feel like you defined your title perfectly in the poem.

I'll fix the run on sentences but I'm already extremely attached to the main character's name and Jack. Thank you for your review, glad you liked it.

Thanks for your review I'll work on those things and hopefully get back to the site with a new draft. I'm so glad you like it. :D

So, it rained after the crash right?

Can you tutor me in drawing? My school art teacher is so critical. What museum would you put this in, given the chance?

Ah, thanks.

Well this is mean. Who is Tiffin? Or should I say what? And what is Ghee, did you mean glee?

???? How did this happen? o_O

I feel like I just read Shakespeare. That's a lot of thought, and I believe it might be hard for some people to digest it. But I think you just ...