Vivian

Damn you beat me to it. I had an idea once to writ e a poem called "I Wonder", before but I forgot what it was about before I could ...

I don't really get it. It's short and nice and sort of romantic but I don't really get what it's about.

Spoken like a true poet. :)

Dude that is just rude. I like the poem it's pretty funny but I want to know if you really could go back in time to primary school would you ...

The truth about love is that love hurts. -- I like it, I have my own conflicts about love since everyone falls into it but know one seems to notice ...

I really want to know what inspired you to write this. It's a great poem and it pulls reader in and I can't say there's anything bad about it especially ...

Wow. Ashmel this is a wonderful poem. I especially like the line "The waves that rise to the sun" it made me think the wave recedes and then how easily ...

Hey. This is a awesome poem it's so intense especially with the three repeat of the words. It sounds like you're going through some sort of trial and there's someone ...

Hey Fortis love the poem. When I started it at the first stanza I thought there were two people at a party until I realized it was horses. The setting ...

Oh thanks. But isn't he the one speaking? Is he reflecting or telling her she can't leave?

It's a really good poem that portrays the depths of your pain. I don't think there's ever a time in anyone's life when they cane take pain though from your ...

I don't really get it but it's nice. Is she doing something bad or is he?

First this bought nearly brought me to tears. It was so suspenseful right on the first sentence. But the title kind of confused me so I had to read it ...

I like it. It sounds a bit poetic and makes you wonder what the other party is thinking. Then it leaves room for imagination by not saying specifically who what ...

This reminds me of two books, the Giver and the Pledge. It already sounds like a great book and I'm not just saying that because I'm a Sci-Fi freak. Also ...