Vivian

Wha thappens to the ones not eaten? Great work by the way. :)

It sounds like a song. It's great.

Um... We Are. Hey Wonder, Vivian here. It's a great poem, I really like it. It sounds like a cheer. Like I said "We Are" would be a great title ...

Lol. ^o^ That caught me off guard.

It's been changed.

Thanks, and I did not notice that. It's meant to be Iris, you're right.

Thank you. Thanks for the tip too. Grammar's not really my thing. ^-^'

S'okay.

This poem worries me Secrete, but as always it's written greatly.

Background info please.

Thanks, I'll change the first chapter. Every woman in that family has magical powers. I'll try and elaborate that more.

Hey, Viv here. I don't actually get this poem, but it's pretty funny. Especially with the last line. I thought you were talking about a best friend, or an ex, ...

You're the sunset. :)

I forgot something. The queen is immortal too, and what she claims to give is immortality. It's because in the next chapter the world will fall to ruin. It's already ...

Thanks for the review, I'll try to change my mistakes. ^^ The king isn't so much as harsh as indifferent. He doesn't give a care in the world what they ...