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Re: The Ashes 3.2
Hey, Viv here to review. It really does seem like Audrey hates him or is annoyed by his very presence. That's just wrong. But she probably has her reasons. Anyhow, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Every Detail
*Perpetual tears*
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: The Ashes 2.2
Oh, that's cool. Everyone's doing that, maybe I should have joined. :D
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: The Ashes 2.1
I like Aysia better. It's quite and unique and probably describes her.
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: The Ashes 2.1
Note: This review has been deleted
Nov 18, 2015
Hey, Viv here to review. I'm suddenly very wary of Jae and annoyed at Mason's ignorance and blindness. Since you changed the part of the story where Jeff dies I'm ... -
Re: United
It's part of my Guardians Awakening series.
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Dvsdvs
I love this. I really do.
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Two/ In A Past Life
Lol, thanks for this. I guess the first two chapters make it seem like Verlaine is the main character and I focus on her a lot mainly because of her ...
Aug 31, 2015 -
Re: Delta/Chapter One
Okay, I've fixed the grammatical errors. The rabbit is a plush toy. I thought it was pretty clear that Josephine is her mother, it's just that Stephy has stopped seeing ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Delta/Chapter One
Thanks, I'll do just that, and I'm glad you liked it.
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Delta/Chapter One
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I've fixed my mistakes but most people call John F. Kennedy Airport JFK Airport where I'm from. Which is why I don't spell it out.
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: how can God be dead if dead birds still breathe.
I am so confused.
Aug 16, 2015 -
Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Four/Burning Girl and the Rebel Leader
Thanks for the review. Now I have to rewrite all of the next chapter but hey, Dune already had his on POV in the original. But I'd like to add ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: The Silence Between You And I
Hellooo, Viv here to do a review. I just want to start off with this. This is a great poem, somewhat vague but the overall meaning is still known. What ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Awaken
You are in luck because I have. I will post another one soon. Also, I'm glad you liked it.
Jul 31, 2015
