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Vivian

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ashes 3.2

    Hey, Viv here to review. It really does seem like Audrey hates him or is annoyed by his very presence. That's just wrong. But she probably has her reasons. Anyhow, ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every Detail

    *Perpetual tears*

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ashes 2.2

    Oh, that's cool. Everyone's doing that, maybe I should have joined. :D

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ashes 2.1

    I like Aysia better. It's quite and unique and probably describes her.

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ashes 2.1

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    Hey, Viv here to review. I'm suddenly very wary of Jae and annoyed at Mason's ignorance and blindness. Since you changed the part of the story where Jeff dies I'm ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: United

    It's part of my Guardians Awakening series.

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Dvsdvs

    I love this. I really do.

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Two/ In A Past Life

    Lol, thanks for this. I guess the first two chapters make it seem like Verlaine is the main character and I focus on her a lot mainly because of her ...

    Aug 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Delta/Chapter One

    Okay, I've fixed the grammatical errors. The rabbit is a plush toy. I thought it was pretty clear that Josephine is her mother, it's just that Stephy has stopped seeing ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Delta/Chapter One

    Thanks, I'll do just that, and I'm glad you liked it.

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Delta/Chapter One

    Thanks for reading and reviewing. I've fixed my mistakes but most people call John F. Kennedy Airport JFK Airport where I'm from. Which is why I don't spell it out.

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: how can God be dead if dead birds still breathe.

    I am so confused.

    Aug 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Four/Burning Girl and the Rebel Leader

    Thanks for the review. Now I have to rewrite all of the next chapter but hey, Dune already had his on POV in the original. But I'd like to add ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Silence Between You And I

    Hellooo, Viv here to do a review. I just want to start off with this. This is a great poem, somewhat vague but the overall meaning is still known. What ...

    Jul 31, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Awaken

    You are in luck because I have. I will post another one soon. Also, I'm glad you liked it.

    Jul 31, 2015


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom