Vivian

Viv here. Wow, that was intense. It was great and kind of painful, the letter was impactful and really tied the story together, kudos. So I'll just point out a ...

Hey Viv here to do a review. I'll just jump right it. 1. "OUr hairs the same." Would be better as "Our golden hair is the same" or "hair's". 2. ...

Hey, Viv here. Sorry this too me so long, Phoenix. I will do my reviews as usual. 1. "She always say it's the perfect song to describe how she and ...

Viv here and oh shit this is from Deven's pov now. And he got a ghost friend too, you were right. I am surprised. :) Jace is a lovely name, ...

Viv, here, it's been forever. I'm so happy this is back. As per usual, I shall start with 3-4 lines of cool feedback ad revision. 1."I wanted to tell you ...

Viv here to try and give you a review. Hope it helps! I really like the idea of his story, especially since I'm into stories with wandering characters. So to ...

Viv here, to happily give you your first review. I wish I could help you remember the song, sadly I do not know it. However, I do know this is ...

Viv here, and because I haven't review in a long while, I apologize if this doesn't seem like much of a review. I hope it's still entertaining if not helpful ...

Hey, Viv here to review. It really does seem like Audrey hates him or is annoyed by his very presence. That's just wrong. But she probably has her reasons. Anyhow, ...

Hey, Viv here to do a review. I'm the first, ;) I'm so happy to see the new family getting along. But Aysia grew up on the streets, can she ...

Well damn, Mason. Hey, Viv here to do a review. But you already knew that. Great story as usual. I'm so glad Mason has a heart and a mind of ...

Hey, Viv here to review. I'm suddenly very wary of Jae and annoyed at Mason's ignorance and blindness. Since you changed the part of the story where Jeff dies I'm ...

Oh God, I died reading this. At first I didn't notice that you wasn't spelled write and I kept reading and reading it like it was written. It sounds like ...

Okay this is the best poem I've read so far today. You are beautifully descriptive and I'm sure Eric was very happy. I'm sure you were hyperbolizing a lot but ...

Viv here to review. First of all, this is a real funny idea and I like the title. I'll start off with Cold feedback. 1. "Okay here's the deal. I'll ...