Vivian

What the hell? What a lovely creepy ending. Pixies right? Or was it Tori, I believe she is still alive. "She rested her should against against the crook o her ...

Everybody can feel pain when they dream, but no one can take things out of it! Lia, that was fantastic! It seems you sure did your research. But why Opal? ...

Flowers in the attic that was fun! Great fourth chapter, congrats on it too. :D (I don't normally make it that far) ^_^' Lance is sort of mean, even for ...

Now I'm even more curious about the secrets of that house. :) XD Okay, first thing I have to say is, That. Was. Great. The perfect third chapter, though I ...

Hey Mila, Viv here. Great story, I loved it. But, what was wrong with the cousin? Did he really not care about anything? And is he planning to kill the ...

Hey Strange. The second first thing I have to say is WOW, that was hilarious and ironic, and very, very, sad. I loved all five poems. Bullet, especially, how'd he ...

Hey Viv here. I thought Anabelle would be alive. Well, alive, alive, not in a hospital. The prologue made it sound like she'd be narrating, not Daniel. And if they ...

Sup. This doesn't seem creepy. ^_^ It sounds like a rant but also a little depressing. In the first stanza you say "He's in your head", but then say "She's ...

Hey Viv here. While reading the poem I forgot the title was dream catcher and ended up getting confused. But, it's a great poem and I think it should be ...

PREACH!! :) Viv here, great poem. I like how you started off with a rant it's so much more feeling. I can relate to this. But love isn't completely senseless, ...

Hey Vivian here, representing team red. I really like this piece, it's such a loving poem but one part confuses me. "Care, love and glory are your true eternal name ...

Okay, I only know one of those songs. "If I die young", but could you give me the name of the other one. It's a good story, did this actually ...

Persy you're confusing me. First you say God the person and then you say god the thing. Which is it? 2 makes me think your talking about your father. Am ...

Hey Harshita, Viv here. I just read Begging for Liberation and I have to say the mood just did a 180. Both poems seem connected to me so I really ...

"if she painted the stars on her 'ceiling' above her head she could pretend she was lying in the grass" I like these lines they give the poem a peaceful ...