Virgil

Think of this as a sort of letter to all corrupt Kings that have reigned throughout history. With the third stanza, I added on the "And sure" to make the ...

Thanks for the review! I'll take adding more imagery into the fourth stanza into consideration--meant to see if anyone else felt that way by posting this.

I actually wrote this on the spot! Took about three hours though so I'd say that it took awhile. Glad you liked it! ^^

The uncapitalized 'I's are a stylistic choice. I'm unsure of what problem you have with 'your' to 'i' is unless the poem doesn't make the fact that there's both a ...

Ah, that makes more sense. Thanks for explaining!

I have a question. Why should the 'I's be capitalized? Just a question. Thanks for the review though!

Thanks for the review!

Nah. Definitely not harsh. The events are probably a little out of order just because of how I ended up writing this, which is a bit odd. Will be taking ...

I made it on the first or second day! :p Isn't it lovely?

Glad the review helped! c:

Glad the review helped! c:

Ah okay! Thanks for letting me know.

Nope! You're totally okay. I can see where it comes off as a little harsh, though that's honesty I'm speaking from. No level of downplaying or playing up, just what ...

@Morrigan AHA! That's what I thought with the black and white though I wasn't sure. Thank you. I'm glad the review helped! c:

-Melts- You have talked to me before about unnecessary words and I felt it going in that I went too wordy with this. I am also melting because this is ...