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Virgil

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: bulletproof

    Doesn't have to be written with capitalization, those rules don't apply to poetry and it's a stylistic choice, not an objective problem. I'll consider adding stanzas in and most likely ...

    Apr 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: infusion

    Well, it sort of goes along with your poetry as being vague. With being vague, it's hard to tell what emotion or tone you're trying to get across with this ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: the seams above her tracksuit pants

    Ahh, thanks for the clarification! That's kind of what I thought it was, but I wasn't quite sure about it.

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i can be your cup of tea.

    Thanks for the review! The lack of capitalization was intentional, as you saw that I didn't capitalize anything in the poem. I don't know what you mean by it needing ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: This is my OCD.

    xD It's fine. I'm pretty sure if you really wanted to, you could ask one of the GMs to delete it for you or I can send it along, though ...

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: This is my OCD.

    [Was that intended for me, or is this an accidental comment here? If it's for me, thank you!]

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: tempest.

    I wanted to point out that this isn't a metaphorical storm, and rather it is literal. That's something that I thought I had made clear in the poem with the ...

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, Satire Re: Orangeface

    I think I kind of overlooked the fact in saying in the review that I do think this is a worthy way to touch on expressing feelings. He is something ...

    Feb 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: admit it

    I know. Everyone has a dud once in awhile, but that doesn't mean it has its strengths as well as its weaknesses. The poem is in no means bad , ...

    Feb 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: In Between

    Woah! o: That is actually really cool and better than the trombone/trumpet I decided to make for that event.

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: she was redheaded.

    Sorry if it came off to be that way, as I didn't intend to sound rude, though I know sometimes it can sound that way. I was more just trying ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: she was redheaded.

    I'm confused as what you're trying to say? Meter is a unit of rhythm in poetry, sure, but it's a poetic device that you don't have to use. It's something ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: she was redheaded.

    Sorry for the late reply. Grammar rules don't apply to poetry, sorry to tell you this. The lack of grammar was intentional, and that's because poetry doesn't have to have ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: skipping stones

    I'm probably going to end up reviewing this, so I'm leaving this here for laterrr.

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: desolate.

    Thank you so much! It means a ton.

    Jan 30, 2017


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind