Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review! So this is a piece of flash fiction that I couldn't really get into. I'm not too deep into the concept of dreams ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So I usually like your poetry, but I was mixed on this one. I thought it was a little confusing but the images ...

This is Kaos here for a review! A little thing that confused me is that you said that this was an excerpt from a novel you'd never write at the ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I personally couldn't get into this poem because it was a gimmick. It's like writing poetry about poetry or writing poetry about a ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The main thing that I didn't like about this poem is that it didn't really add anything new and didn't have really anything ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I didn't find much conflict between the characters in your story, or rather much characterization at all. There were subtle makings of who ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So you tackle the idea of self-doubt, or at least try to. That was one of the things that I found of this ...

Time for a review, as promised. So, something that I've noticed over time is that your poetry doesn't like to stay inside the bold lines of the coloring book in ...

This is Kaos here for a review! at this point, we're only gonna be old friends; (the heat that forms from the student section and travels through sweat and cotton ...

This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with this is not explaining your emotions. Happy, sad, sorrow, hope, we get it. I am one who dislikes emotion ...

This is Kaos here for a review! A character once said that he wasn't good with organic lifeforms, I strongly agree, Math and science are my forte, The rest is ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I noticed is that everything is in bold. I suggest you take this out of the poem because it ...

This is Kaos here for a review! My feelings on this poem were the most mixed I've ever felt. There were some things here that did good in creating something ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So you said in the description that this was based on or at least a little based on NaNo? One thing that I ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I see these types of poems that have a noun or adjective or something of that sort at the top and then the ...