VictoriaAnderson1230

Nice feel very clear but at the same time sad. It's always hard to be at war with yourself especially about something that can't be stopped and in this case, ...

Sooo dialogue was a tad bit hard to follow but not a major concern. I haven't read the first two parts so not entirely sure what is going on but ...

So let's get right into this work of descriptive and intense piece of art. Like darn had to down a bottle of water after reading this with my flat mates. ...

Yasss love the fact that whenever I sign in I see that there has been an update on what is slowly becoming my favorite YWS story. Once again your use ...

Now I don't 100 percent know what going on will take a read of the first and second part but I can say as a confused reader that I am ...

So right off the bat, your opening line was extremely captivating. It makes the readers wonder what is going on. not only that it is followed by a series of ...

Interesting. Few problems popped up for me "I heard Katy wooing and laughing. She knew I was the worst driver in the universe, probably. Sometimes driving by itself is a ...

Love the suspense. I want to know what her power is, what the mansion looked like. I'm a really interesting read and the story flowed so well in the fact ...

This was a beautiful piece filled with so much vivid imagery. I'm a massive fan of poetry so I liked that you included where your original idea arose from. my ...

Yassss first one to comment and so happy to see that there is a part two. Once again great use of description and imagery. Your dialogue was clear and easy ...

So getting a very Ricky Roydan feel.Not sure if I got his name right(This is not a bad thing, in fact, i'm saying your writing is the close second to ...

Love this so much description and leaves me wondering whats going on. Why is he/she just wondering around?So much suspense and so well written well done :) I think the ...

A minor mistake in this sentence -I don’t lock my door even though, but I have never slept out- I found it interesting though the "sorry dude" threw me off ...

I really enjoyed this. Deffineatley links to spring. I wish I could say more but never been good at explaining why I like a certain poem but it is a ...