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Vergil

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Rina: Star angel

    So the incredibly short chapters are pretty of putting at first, and I feel it could have been formatted better. Also, her literally reaching out to touch a start and ...

    Dec 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: In Bad Habits I See Light

    Imaging this from an extremely addicted persons point of view, as a former addict myself, makes it a relatively interesting read. Mentioning tattoos and piercings alongside ALCOHOL over blows how ...

    Dec 7, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Christmas business

    Gotta love giving credit to the original creators, very cool of you. Anyways, this is your average fanfic, with some good settings and not terrible characters but lackluster dialogue, not ...

    Dec 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Cats

    Firstly I liked to say you might be interested in “don’t fuck with cat’s” on Netflix, it tells an interesting story about animal abuse. I’m not nearly as…”in love”, for ...

    Dec 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Things I Want to Do with My Love

    Cute! And for what it is as a simple love letter, I like it. There’s not much to criticize here, considering what the content is. The most I’ll say is ...

    Dec 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: She’s here

    While this is just a lil silly and goofy, and pretty good comedically, I would like to mention the tension provided from the horror aspects. Frankly, for being about MARIAH ...

    Dec 5, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: LOVING THE LOVE

    Starting off, this is definitely a nitpick but for a poem this is quite long. But that doesn’t matter all that much. More than anything this poem confuses me on ...

    Dec 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nobody Loves Me

    Whilst this poem is well worded and has a good layout, it does feel disjointed as a whole. Moving directly from the first boy to the “chocolate” boy with no ...

    Dec 5, 2025


Even strength must bow to wisdom sometimes.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief