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Re: Rina: Star angel
So the incredibly short chapters are pretty of putting at first, and I feel it could have been formatted better. Also, her literally reaching out to touch a start and ...
Dec 9, 2025 -
Re: In Bad Habits I See Light
Imaging this from an extremely addicted persons point of view, as a former addict myself, makes it a relatively interesting read. Mentioning tattoos and piercings alongside ALCOHOL over blows how ...
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Re: Christmas business
Gotta love giving credit to the original creators, very cool of you. Anyways, this is your average fanfic, with some good settings and not terrible characters but lackluster dialogue, not ...
Dec 6, 2025 -
Re: Cats
Firstly I liked to say you might be interested in “don’t fuck with cat’s” on Netflix, it tells an interesting story about animal abuse. I’m not nearly as…”in love”, for ...
Dec 5, 2025 -
Re: The Things I Want to Do with My Love
Cute! And for what it is as a simple love letter, I like it. There’s not much to criticize here, considering what the content is. The most I’ll say is ...
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Re: She’s here
While this is just a lil silly and goofy, and pretty good comedically, I would like to mention the tension provided from the horror aspects. Frankly, for being about MARIAH ...
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Re: LOVING THE LOVE
Starting off, this is definitely a nitpick but for a poem this is quite long. But that doesn’t matter all that much. More than anything this poem confuses me on ...
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Re: Nobody Loves Me
Whilst this poem is well worded and has a good layout, it does feel disjointed as a whole. Moving directly from the first boy to the “chocolate” boy with no ...
Dec 5, 2025
