Ventomology

Hoorah! I knew including little details would help keep the tone I wanted! Thanks for the review! I promise I'll be caught up with yours by the end of Wednesday.

The feelings of longtime friends are sometimes difficult to decipher... Muhahaha. Also, you will certainly get an awesome Drake scene quite soon. :)

Hmm, I follow a pretty strict rule on paragraphing, so I'm not sure how I'd fix that, but I'll keep your advice in mind. Thanks to you and your friend!

Err, this is actually part of the same book. I just divided it differently than usual. Thank you for the review!

Err... A-plus-plus... Those plus signs somehow snuck out.

OH MY GOD I TOTALLY FORGOT TO MENTION THIS: Your title is fantabulous. A pun usage.

And here I thought my titles were scaring people off (which is probably not a good thing). Thanks for giving my work a chance! I'm glad you suspect the distracted ...

Thank you for the review! Mr. Pyus has an odd tendency to never see the weirdness around him, but I suppose you wouldn't know that.

Hey! You decided to show up! (Seriously, don't worry about being late. Tort is nowhere near you and Hunter right now.) 1. I do believe you may be onto something, ...

Ah, yeah, the dialogue mostly serves for consistency's sake in this chapter, so it's like you said: kind of pointless. Anyways, thank you very much for the review! I'm glad ...

Well, I suppose. Maybe I just interpreted some details the wrong way.

Thank you!

Tort, I cannot review your latest chapters if they are not posted in the literary forum.

No, no. Ender and Tort still don't have last week's chapter ready yet. You and I are the only ones really keeping up by this point.

Alas, there are some protagonists no one will ever like. Also, Martin's heritage is important later on, so keep it in mind. ( It definitely has nothing to do with ...