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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)

    And here I thought my titles were scaring people off (which is probably not a good thing). Thanks for giving my work a chance! I'm glad you suspect the distracted ...

    Sun Oct 25, 2015 10:18 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)

    Thank you for the review! Mr. Pyus has an odd tendency to never see the weirdness around him, but I suppose you wouldn't know that.

    Sun Oct 25, 2015 9:00 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    Hey! You decided to show up! (Seriously, don't worry about being late. Tort is nowhere near you and Hunter right now.) 1. I do believe you may be onto something, ...

    Sun Oct 25, 2015 4:04 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)

    Ah, yeah, the dialogue mostly serves for consistency's sake in this chapter, so it's like you said: kind of pointless. Anyways, thank you very much for the review! I'm glad ...

    Sun Oct 25, 2015 4:29 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 12): A Wild Encounter

    Well, I suppose. Maybe I just interpreted some details the wrong way.

    Tue Oct 20, 2015 11:46 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.02)

    Thank you!

    Sat Oct 17, 2015 1:57 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10

    Tort, I cannot review your latest chapters if they are not posted in the literary forum.

    Fri Oct 16, 2015 11:43 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part One - Midweek Action

    No, no. Ender and Tort still don't have last week's chapter ready yet. You and I are the only ones really keeping up by this point.

    Sat Oct 03, 2015 6:37 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    Alas, there are some protagonists no one will ever like. Also, Martin's heritage is important later on, so keep it in mind. ( It definitely has nothing to do with ...

    Tue Sep 29, 2015 10:41 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.05)

    Ah, the vampire. You'll be seeing more of him very soon. For number 4, I'm glad you relate to her! Also, tell me if I overstep or do something wrong ...

    Tue Sep 29, 2015 10:27 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.10)

    Oh, the enchanted DNA thing is more like having a gene turned on or off. It can change, but not easily. And whatever suspicions you have, you're probably somewhere on ...

    Tue Sep 29, 2015 7:14 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.09)

    Ack! Mistakes! I shall fix those this afternoon. By the way, does the 'sir' rule apply to other formalities like mister, miss, and Madame?

    Tue Sep 29, 2015 1:28 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.07)

    AHAHAHA! You will see what happens to poor Martin. I have excellent things planned for him when I reach Friday. I'll fix the phonetics. Thanks for the review! Remember to ...

    Mon Sep 28, 2015 11:50 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.06)

    Hmm, I don't think the drama of route 40 eastbound subsides until I start writing the Thursday scenes. I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it though!

    Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:34 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog

    Maybe I was looking at the wrong part when I double-checked the review... sorry about that.

    Sun Sep 27, 2015 10:53 pm


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