Ventomology

ACK, A TYPO! I shall fix that straight away. Sorry I never got around to those reviews I promised to catch up on this week. I went on another baking ...

Yeah, the third-person present throws off some people (myself included), but it gives a sense of "here and now" that I quite like. I'll look over those things you mentioned. ...

A weeping willow is an actual plant. Did you combine Moaning Myrtle and that one car-trapping tree? I actually haven't decided on Willow and Drake. It depends on how I ...

I thought Rick might see this scene as if he's watching a movie that goes into slow motion, so maybe that's what you're picking up on. Since the characters in ...

Ugh I promise I am going to get to this review. Tech week is death.

Hoorah! I knew including little details would help keep the tone I wanted! Thanks for the review! I promise I'll be caught up with yours by the end of Wednesday.

The feelings of longtime friends are sometimes difficult to decipher... Muhahaha. Also, you will certainly get an awesome Drake scene quite soon. :)

Hmm, I follow a pretty strict rule on paragraphing, so I'm not sure how I'd fix that, but I'll keep your advice in mind. Thanks to you and your friend!

Err, this is actually part of the same book. I just divided it differently than usual. Thank you for the review!

Err... A-plus-plus... Those plus signs somehow snuck out.

OH MY GOD I TOTALLY FORGOT TO MENTION THIS: Your title is fantabulous. A pun usage.

And here I thought my titles were scaring people off (which is probably not a good thing). Thanks for giving my work a chance! I'm glad you suspect the distracted ...

Thank you for the review! Mr. Pyus has an odd tendency to never see the weirdness around him, but I suppose you wouldn't know that.

Hey! You decided to show up! (Seriously, don't worry about being late. Tort is nowhere near you and Hunter right now.) 1. I do believe you may be onto something, ...

Ah, yeah, the dialogue mostly serves for consistency's sake in this chapter, so it's like you said: kind of pointless. Anyways, thank you very much for the review! I'm glad ...