Ventomology

Hi hello! Superheroes are just the best so of course I had to take a gander. Now then, review time: Writing Craft Comments: 1. So I will note that this ...

Hello! Man, people get so intimidated by short poems. Sorry you had to wait so long on a review! 1. Okay so I know that this is a short poem, ...

Hello!! Man, I meant to hop on the LMS review train when I got back from my summer job, but so much was happening. Maybe someday I'll get through reading ...

OMG HELLO I am so excited oh my god how did I not know there was like an LMS humor/sci-fi novel going on you are my new favorite. Anyways. I ...

Hello! So yes, I did drop back and read chapter one, so hopefully this will be better than the last review I dropped on a lone later chapter. Onwards, I ...

Hey! So, I haven't read the rest of this. Sorry! I'll bookmark it and maybe get around to at least reading the earlier chapters before I have to go back ...

Hello hello, There's nothing quite like writing a poem to get out all the nasty feelies. That's such a vibe. If you're feeling down in the dumps, I hope you ...

Hello hello! Returning the favor, as one does. Also I am super curious to know what my own work inspired someone else to write. A bit selfish and self-centered, but ...

Hello! I may or may not be drowning in my own love poems right now, which I suppose explains why I've been reviewing them lately too. They're so fun to ...

Hey! There's nothing like a good old love poem. Let's dig in, shall we? General Comments: 1. A lot of the rhymes that you actually picked are pretty great! I ...

Heya! This was pretty fun to read! And a good way to sate my never-ending love of Shakespearean English (the Shakespeare compilation my aunt gave me was, apparently, not enough). ...

Hello! I saw the title and was intrigued. I enjoy stories that deal with life and death and eternities and all that, so of course I had to see what ...

Hey! I'm always down for a bit of satire, and when I saw the title I just couldn't resist! I've been learning Mandarin on and off for the better part ...

Hello! I am tempted to make a comment about e e cummings, but I shall refrain. Technical Commentary: So you have an incredibly strong overall metaphor here, and I absolutely ...

Hey! So, I'm not sure if by 'monologue' you intended to write short stand-up (like what SNL hosts do every week) or the kind of monologue that you would find ...