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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 19 (LMS IV)

    Hello!! Man, I meant to hop on the LMS review train when I got back from my summer job, but so much was happening. Maybe someday I'll get through reading ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Science Fiction Re: Delta - 15.1

    OMG HELLO I am so excited oh my god how did I not know there was like an LMS humor/sci-fi novel going on you are my new favorite. Anyways. I ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Humor Re: 3AM Tomfoolery: Chapter 2

    Hello! So yes, I did drop back and read chapter one, so hopefully this will be better than the last review I dropped on a lone later chapter. Onwards, I ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf Eyes chapter 6 *rewrite*

    Hey! So, I haven't read the rest of this. Sorry! I'll bookmark it and maybe get around to at least reading the earlier chapters before I have to go back ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Self-Destruct

    Hello hello, There's nothing quite like writing a poem to get out all the nasty feelies. That's such a vibe. If you're feeling down in the dumps, I hope you ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: I, She

    Hello hello! Returning the favor, as one does. Also I am super curious to know what my own work inspired someone else to write. A bit selfish and self-centered, but ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Distraction

    Hello! I may or may not be drowning in my own love poems right now, which I suppose explains why I've been reviewing them lately too. They're so fun to ...

    Dec 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Her

    Hey! There's nothing like a good old love poem. Let's dig in, shall we? General Comments: 1. A lot of the rhymes that you actually picked are pretty great! I ...

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Other » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Shakespearean Insult Letter

    Heya! This was pretty fun to read! And a good way to sate my never-ending love of Shakespearean English (the Shakespeare compilation my aunt gave me was, apparently, not enough). ...

    Dec 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Eternity Curse - Chapter 1

    Hello! I saw the title and was intrigued. I enjoy stories that deal with life and death and eternities and all that, so of course I had to see what ...

    Sep 5, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Satire Re: Why Everyone SHOULD learn mandarin

    Hey! I'm always down for a bit of satire, and when I saw the title I just couldn't resist! I've been learning Mandarin on and off for the better part ...

    Jun 13, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the eventual meeting of water to my mouth

    Hello! I am tempted to make a comment about e e cummings, but I shall refrain. Technical Commentary: So you have an incredibly strong overall metaphor here, and I absolutely ...

    May 18, 2018
  • Other » Satire, Theatre Re: Contemporary Monolouge- comedy

    Hey! So, I'm not sure if by 'monologue' you intended to write short stand-up (like what SNL hosts do every week) or the kind of monologue that you would find ...

    May 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Supernatural Re: The Alchemist's Bookshop [Part 2]

    Hey hey! Sorry it took me a bit to get back to this. School. Ugh. Technical Commentary: Nice phone conversation! It can be pretty hard to remember to bring up ...

    May 15, 2018
  • Short Story » Romantic, Supernatural Re: The Alchemist's Bookshop [Part 1]

    Hello! I see we've got some modern-fantasy here, which is honestly one of the most enjoyable subgenres of fantasy out there. It's just not taken advantage of enough! Anyways, diving ...

    May 8, 2018


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