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Re: Let Me Love You
Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. [s] Red Strikethrough [/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new paragraph. All ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Learning to Live
Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. [s] Red Strikethrough [/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new paragraph. January ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Ashes, Ashes
[spoiler] Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. [s] Red Strikethrough [/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new paragraph. ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Disabilities
Grammar: [spoiler] Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. [s] Red Strikethrough [/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Broken Hearts
[spoiler] Red = My corrections or suggestions. Bold = My comments. Underline = What I’ll be commenting on. [s] Red Strikethrough [/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new paragraph. ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Twenty
First, grammar corrections. Really take this into consideration... It's only in a spoiler because I don't wanna fill your entire screen with it. 30 pages in word - no joke. ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Accidental Exposure
Grammar: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. Small Purple = My comments. Italics = What I’ll be commenting on. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Ignorance is Bliss : Prologue
So I need to head off to [a really late] lunch any minute now, so I just did a quick read through this... that basially means I did no grammar ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Love's Devil Moon.
Grammar corrections and boring technicalities: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit She l ay there under the stars in the lukewarm spring night. Her ...
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Re: -Inconcessus- Fifteen
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit “What are you doing here?” I blurted before I could stop myself. Isaac looked amused. “Hi to you ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Fourteen
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Elena smiled softly and joined me on the mossy log. “That is one of the wonders of our ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Thirteen
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit It was as though I had entered a world in absence of light. The night closed in on ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Twelve
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Carmen sat beside me, his body heat feeling oddly warm against mine. He must have felt it , ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Eleven
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit I also couldn’t ignore that at his sudden appearance, my senses were screaming at me to run. I ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Ten
[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Nate’s eyes were closed, the lids a blackish-blue color of fatigue, along with full moons circling them. His ...
Apr 30, 2009