Vasticity

This is an awesome poem. It's perfectly structured, with good words, beat, and a well-interpreted storyline. I wish I could give you more of a critique, but there's really nothing ...

Nice. As vox said, I love the concept. But, maybe you could make it a bit longer, and get rid of the punctuation and spelling errors. Then it'd be perfect! ...

GIVE ME MORE!!! Such anticipation and suspense. Lots of action! Which is what I like. Unfortuneately, you'll never be as action-packed as me. Just joking. (But you won't.) :backtotopic: Okay, ...

this is a nice poem, very dark and grim. I like it. :D This is the type of thing I write, but I interpret it in movies. It seems like ...

First off, I agree with everything that lily said. (What's the point of repeating what she said? :? ) Second off, this is not a script. If this were a ...

I can see the story you're portraying with this, which is a sad one, obviously, and a story very frequently portrayed in the media. I like it, but the beat ...

This was really interesting, with nice structuring and a good beat. I can't find anything really bad with it, so this isn't much of a review. But anyway, I recommend ...

Wow. I hope you aren't basing this on personal expierience. :smt088 They say write what you know, but I wouldn't want to know this. Anyway, there's an issue with your ...

First off, As you are in love with Henry VIII As I am with my history teacher :smt103 Something about the wording of this poem doesn't fit with me. Mind ...

Hi. I like your descriptions, and the story seems very interesting, but there are a few problems. First off, my English textbook says, 'Do not format your descriptions as though ...

I like your formatting of the poem, I mean, who wouldn't. Also, there is a good and meaningful message behind this, which is stick through it. You obviously saw that ...

I thought this was cute. It almost reminds me a lot of Macavity: The Mystery Cat, by T.S. Elliot, which you may or may not be aware of, is the ...

Very nice. I see you've paid great attention and truly enjoy Lewis Carroll's work. Anyway, down to business. Normally I have to instruct people on the beat of the poem, ...

Nice job! Normally I have to tell people about the beat, and fading in and out from rhyming to not rhyming, but you seem to have everything involving that under ...

Hi. You have great imagination when you're writing this, and the imagery you display in your words really sets off the storyline. It's hard to understand what you're trying to ...