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Vanya

  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Mommy's Wish

    Hiii I'm Vanya, not long ago I joined this society to find people like me you know like ........just forget it. So I just read your short story and it ...

    Dec 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The breakup

    Hiii there!! What you wrote was great not everyone talks about it. Love is letting go, feelings change, begging someone to stay, crying for them, telling them how much you ...

    Nov 25, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: burnt pansies ripped apart

    Hi there At first, I tried to understand it, but it was far from my understanding. I could only understand the first two lines, and yes, it's not you. Your ...

    Nov 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Sweet Cherry Blossom

    It was so good.I liked it really really much and the fact that you wrote it for your mother made if even more special. Our mothers are like blessings that ...

    Nov 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Giving Up

    It was incredible how far I understood you have given up on them yet you remember them you remember there every want need expressions of liking disliking it is just ...

    Nov 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: my mind is a mess, so i will fold my towels

    Woww it was so good you can feel the wheitage of grief in your words the example you explained of folding towels is new to me and it is so ...

    Nov 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: held by a memory, lost to a stranger

    It was awesome, especially when you defined what the girl's father looked ked like. Each example was right on the point. But I didn't quite understand the last paragraph where ...

    Nov 7, 2024


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