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Re: Mommy's Wish
Hiii I'm Vanya, not long ago I joined this society to find people like me you know like ........just forget it. So I just read your short story and it ...
Dec 24, 2024 -
Re: The breakup
Hiii there!! What you wrote was great not everyone talks about it. Love is letting go, feelings change, begging someone to stay, crying for them, telling them how much you ...
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Re: burnt pansies ripped apart
Hi there At first, I tried to understand it, but it was far from my understanding. I could only understand the first two lines, and yes, it's not you. Your ...
Nov 23, 2024 -
Re: Sweet Cherry Blossom
It was so good.I liked it really really much and the fact that you wrote it for your mother made if even more special. Our mothers are like blessings that ...
Nov 23, 2024 -
Re: Giving Up
It was incredible how far I understood you have given up on them yet you remember them you remember there every want need expressions of liking disliking it is just ...
Nov 8, 2024 -
Re: my mind is a mess, so i will fold my towels
Woww it was so good you can feel the wheitage of grief in your words the example you explained of folding towels is new to me and it is so ...
Nov 8, 2024 -
Re: held by a memory, lost to a stranger
It was awesome, especially when you defined what the girl's father looked ked like. Each example was right on the point. But I didn't quite understand the last paragraph where ...
Nov 7, 2024
