Vampyre

Hey Silent! Oh I just have to say, I absolutely loved this! It was beautiful, and it was sad, and so emotional it made me wonder if it comes from ...

Hey, Vamp here to review, as requested :) Sorry it took me so long to get to it :( Legend: Grammar/spelling/punctuation will be in red , and comments/suggestions will be ...

Love love love! 'Tis all I can say. Well, actually it's not, or there'd be no point in me reviewing it. But I do love this piece! Anyway, as usual, ...

Hey, Vampyre here to review for you today :) I really like this piece, to start us off :) It's nice to read, and I like the chaos. However, it ...

Hey Persephoneia, my name is Vampyre and I'll be reviewing for you today :) First of all, I really love this style, it's very simplistic but I think it works ...

Awww, this is so cute! I think your Angel will really love it, and I think it's so sweet that you've written this for her :) I think Fries has ...

Hey :) 'Pyre's here to review for you today :) Firstly, I really like the emotion in this poem. As a punk/goth who goes around giving free hugs and telling ...

Hey, guess who! You're right! It's the 'Pyre! Well, I have to say to start with, I absolutely loved this. It was beautiful, it was meaningful, it was deep, it ...

Ok, Vamp here, to review as requested :) Firstly, I love the idea. If I heard a synopsis of it, I'd want to come and read the book. When I ...

Vampyre is here! First of all, I have to say: I love this one. I love the layout, I love the word choices, it's a brilliant piece. It really stirred ...

Guess who's here to review? :D Okay, first impressions, I really like this :) It's short, but very well written and very strong. Quality beats quantity any day :) I ...

Hey, Vamp here to review :) I must warn you, I'm feeling VERY nitpicky, and will probably go over this almost sentence by sentence. I'm also probably going to be ...

Hey, Vamp here to review as requested! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, I was eating dinner :P Anyway, on to the review! I liked ...

Ok so everyone else has commented on the actual story, so I'm just going to correct all the spelling/grammar mistakes, because they're making a funny, well-captured story harder to read. ...

Well, I came to review, but honestly could see no grammar/spelling mistakes, and nothing I would change or correct! I loved your story, and I loved the emotion, and...and...Oh I ...