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this is a nice poem I think. There is feeling and that's great. Heartbreak is a terribly emotion and like the first commentator said I feel this is a poem ...

hey there,thanx a lot. well any criticism is good criticism and perfection is a lie. 'dress of fire' as in a red dress. i needed to add a little flavour ...

wow this is a neat poem. It is very descriptive yet very mysterious. Is he old is he young? or is he old but is stuck at the same age? ...

This is quite a dramatic piece, a lot of rhyming. But it's effective, a picture formulates in my mind which is great because that essentially means I get it. Good ...

Thanks a lot. This isn't the last from me. I promise u that.Now i just have to figure out how to change where it is. This site is kinda confusing. ...

Quite touching, i like the way the stanzas are short but are just right. The masochism is clearly reflected I think. good work.

wow, very lovely work. I am inspired. Not too much and not too little, the perfect mix. Bravo!

It definitely fits the dramatic criteria, very gripping. i like the rhythm it definitely pulls the reader in. I can feel what this poem is saying.