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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane

    So, I have to say that I really enjoyed this and I hope that you finish this eventually. :) For some reason, when I saw that his last name was ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Lost 'Till You're Found (2)

    Hey there! I liked this piece. The beginning was gripping and I liked how it was longer, but moved fast enough not to be boring. However, I have some nit ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: uuhhhh

    Hey there! This was a pretty gripping storyline. I clicked on it because of it's title. :) I liked it, but I was too caught up in some of the ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Last....

    I really liked this. It can relate to a lot of people, which can be hard to accomplish. The last line was by far my favorite. The only nitpick I ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.

    Hey, there! I have to say that I liked the prologue better, but this was still good. I like that you alluded to something being different from what people would ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I See You

    Great song! I really like how you compare the situation to tug of war. It makes the song seem less... negative, I guess, but without losing what the song is ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: So This Is Goodbye

    Hey there. Love the poem. I think its very beautiful and heartfelt. Although I know practically nothing about poetry, in my opinion I think it flowed nicely. However, I found ...

    Dec 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lost At Sea

    Hey! Awesome short story. I really wasn't expecting the ending! It was very short, sweet, and to the point. I think you should make it into a novel, by the ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Write What You Know

    Wow. I was not expecting that. No offence, or anything. :) I usually don't read in the romantic short stories section, but the title caught my attention. I loved this! ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Live On The Shore.

    Hey there! I loved this. I thought it had moments of happiness and sadness, and the end even made me "Awe!" out loud! I agree with wewinwelose about the mineral ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Abducted

    Ooooh! Good poem! It's too bad that the stupid computer didn't save what you originally wrote! :( I didn't really find any mistakes, but, then again, I could have skimmed ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ...

    Hi there! Awesome poem. Very imaginative. I have to say that I agree with ilyaeelz. I can't exactly pin point what the meaning of the poem was, but it was ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Your Saying You're In Love

    I like this song! I'm not going to mention the grammar mistakes in details (since it's already been done), but I must say that they take away from the song. ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alaina's File

    I'm liking this story so far! It's very interesting. When I first read 'Dr. Silinstra' I read it as 'Dr. Silantro!' lol. But, anyway, my dyslectic issues aren't important. Love ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fallen

    Cool poem! I like how it leaves things to the imagination. Poetry isn't usually my thing, so I don't have many nitpicks. However, I do agree with what the other ...

    Dec 5, 2010


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