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Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane
So, I have to say that I really enjoyed this and I hope that you finish this eventually. :) For some reason, when I saw that his last name was ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: Lost 'Till You're Found (2)
Hey there! I liked this piece. The beginning was gripping and I liked how it was longer, but moved fast enough not to be boring. However, I have some nit ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: uuhhhh
Hey there! This was a pretty gripping storyline. I clicked on it because of it's title. :) I liked it, but I was too caught up in some of the ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Last....
I really liked this. It can relate to a lot of people, which can be hard to accomplish. The last line was by far my favorite. The only nitpick I ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.
Hey, there! I have to say that I liked the prologue better, but this was still good. I like that you alluded to something being different from what people would ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: I See You
Great song! I really like how you compare the situation to tug of war. It makes the song seem less... negative, I guess, but without losing what the song is ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: So This Is Goodbye
Hey there. Love the poem. I think its very beautiful and heartfelt. Although I know practically nothing about poetry, in my opinion I think it flowed nicely. However, I found ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Lost At Sea
Hey! Awesome short story. I really wasn't expecting the ending! It was very short, sweet, and to the point. I think you should make it into a novel, by the ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Write What You Know
Wow. I was not expecting that. No offence, or anything. :) I usually don't read in the romantic short stories section, but the title caught my attention. I loved this! ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: I Live On The Shore.
Hey there! I loved this. I thought it had moments of happiness and sadness, and the end even made me "Awe!" out loud! I agree with wewinwelose about the mineral ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Abducted
Ooooh! Good poem! It's too bad that the stupid computer didn't save what you originally wrote! :( I didn't really find any mistakes, but, then again, I could have skimmed ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: ...
Hi there! Awesome poem. Very imaginative. I have to say that I agree with ilyaeelz. I can't exactly pin point what the meaning of the poem was, but it was ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Your Saying You're In Love
I like this song! I'm not going to mention the grammar mistakes in details (since it's already been done), but I must say that they take away from the song. ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Alaina's File
I'm liking this story so far! It's very interesting. When I first read 'Dr. Silinstra' I read it as 'Dr. Silantro!' lol. But, anyway, my dyslectic issues aren't important. Love ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Fallen
Cool poem! I like how it leaves things to the imagination. Poetry isn't usually my thing, so I don't have many nitpicks. However, I do agree with what the other ...
Dec 5, 2010
