TylynRae

I don't think its too boring =]. Anyway, the one scene I would improve on is the part where they have to show that they're harmless. It reminds me of ...

I'm working my way back through all of these trying to leave comments. I read all of the ones that were in the category and its quite a handful, haha ...

I forgot to comment on this one, I read all of them, so I think I'm just going to ponit out a few things I liked in each. The little ...

Hello there =] I found this in the list that didn't have reviews yet, so I decided that I"m going to start through the list and get as many of ...

Hello there =]. I think its just me... maybe, but in the first few lines I didn't find much of a rhythm. I think thats partly because you didn't separate ...

Hey there =]. Okay, so I think you have great rhythm, I even clapped it out slow and I think I only found one teensy part that didnt flow perfectly ...

Heyy there =]. I really liked this poem and the way you laid it out was interesting. The rhythm was pretty good, but there were a few parts that were ...

Gah! I totally loved this! It's not what you see in poetry today. And it just has so much TRUTH in it thats its just mind boggling good! And you'd ...

Okay. I only have one little nitpick that I have to say quickly before I forget. Third stanza, last line. I think you need one more syllable to make it ...

Ah! Finally! I never thought I'd ever meet another person in the world that loves Love Actually as much as I do! It's a brilliant movie thats just... it puts ...

I really liked this one. The part about the fragility of butterfly wings was really nice. I could really see that image in my head. The imagery was really good ...

I didn't understand for a minute, why you spaced the lines out. And then I thought I got it, but then I was like... well. This is a song, so ...

Hey there! I'm going to make this quick because I only found a few errors. The freeform was really good. Firstly, in the first poem you said pedals/ petals twice, ...

Ah, this was really cute. The rhythm in the first few stanzas and in the last couple are really good though you seemed to have lost it a bit in ...

Hey there. I saw this on that one hundred topics that haven't been reviewed thing and this one popped out at me. I usually don't get into these kinds of ...