TylynRae

Okay. So this piece did make me laugh and it would be perfect for a children's book =]. It was really cute and for a twelve year old it was ...

I liked this poem a lot. Mainly because I really liked the wording and the subject in general. Whenever I need metaphors I go for music like things =]. But ...

I think that the overall idea of this piece was good, but it just didn't have good flow for me. It was choppy, I didn't know if you were going ...

Heyy there =]. Over all this poem is really good. Your word choice is absolutely fantastic. It's refreshing to see that not everyone has a limited vocabulary. I like the ...

This was really great, I'd like to say first. I only saw a few flaws, one being that you over use 'once more' a lot and... I can't remember the ...

This was really great. I had a good idea of what was happening and I like how you kept some things to the imagination, for instance not telling us exactly ...

I recognize this! =] Sorry I couldn't help more. Fantasy is not my area of expertise. But anyway, I think the person that commented before me had a lot of ...

I didn't know if you meant to spell werewolf wrong or not, but you did, first off. My main thing with this piece is the wording. There is one line ...

I really liked this piece. It flowed nicely for the most part, though there were a few parts where I was just a little iffy. But it was really pretty ...

Hey there =]. I really liked this piece. The style is a bit different for me, since I haven't been reviewing as much as I should be doing. But I ...

Oh goodness! First off, I flipped to this after catching your name in something that I was reading. Snoink. haha. Well anyway, when I first read it I instantly thought ...

I think overall that the idea of this piece is really good and you describe your characters well, giving insight to what is going on. But like MrMustard said... it ...

I don't know what to think of it. I really like the rhythm and the imagery is beautiful. =] You say butt. Ha ha. I don't know whether that's a ...

Good good good =] You've definitely improved from the other things that I've read. Not that they weren't good, because they were, but you've expanded a lot and there's a ...

Ok. I'm a big horse person. The problem I see with this, sorry if any one else has noticed it, is that the jockey's rarely ever own the horses. The ...