I really liked this piece. It flowed nicely for the most part, though there were a few parts where I was just a little iffy. But it was really pretty and very sad. The way you spaced things out and how the stanzas flowed were really nice too. So overall it was a nice piece. I might try to adjust a word here and there, just for the sake of better flow, though it's good enough that you really don't need to change anything. Keep up the good work =]
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