TylynRae

Review here: This made me so sad for you, not having control of your body or movements sounds really tough and you did a great job portraying the struggle. The ...

Heya! First and foremost I really liked the theme behind this, I thought the story was intriguing. I had to reread it a couple of times to find any sort ...

Hey! It’s been a while since I’ve done a review so bare with me. You had great use of imagery throughout the poem and I felt like for the most ...

Well. I liked this. There doesn't have to be a point for it to be good. It made you think about what the h*** was going on and that's all ...

Okey doke here. I'm going to get my nitpicks out before I give you praise. 1. Format format format! Let the readers rely on the words themselves rather on the ...

Hey there =] I really liked where you were going with this piece. I think the overall message of this poem was something I could easily go for. It sort ...

I thought that this was interesting. Your word choice was really neat during the verses. However, i think just saying the full of hatred part once or twice with the ...

all I can say is wow... I really enjoyed this piece. It was short, and it wasn't like it was overly dramatic in the imagery or anything just out of ...

Personally I liked this one. I agree with the reviewer above me that it doesn't need to rhyme to be good. It sort of frightened me seeing how old you ...

The only grammar mistake I really noticed what that you misspelled voice. Other than that, the grammar was good. I read the title to this piece and was honestly about ...

This is absolutely adorable! Haha, I really enjoyed this =] You should definitely send this in to a publishing company or Something. This would make an excellent children's book =] ...

Hi there. I think this would be more appropriate as a blog entry... simply because you seem to be venting rather than really thinking about what you're writing. There's nothing ...

Hi there =] There was one sentence where you said 'there first time I saw her' change there to the. Also, the description on her eyes is a bit jumbled. ...

So, this one caught my attention because of the title. I once knew someone who only though we lived in order to sustain life. In some aspects I agree, in ...

First off. I absolutely adore your avvie. I'm sort of an enormous heath ledger fan. So anything relating to the joker in any way makes me happy. =] Secondly, I ...