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there's never a clear description of the person. Joseph Carey Merrick was the Elephant Man, so I figured I didn't need to spell out what he looked like; should I ...

Ooop, just saw this in the first chapter: The Nagai shrugged. “Isn’t that the way of your kind? A member is inconvenient, now he his dead, problem solved.” His = ...

Yeep! :D Great; Gyr strikes back! :D Just one thing that I really noticed: The Nagai reluctantly keyed for the door to open, only half looking in should she be ...

Now it's my turn to "EEEEK!!!" :D Don't worry, I've got the timeline all fixed up (well... sort of) and as the date of Holmes' birth is debatable I've tweaked ...

WHAT? She stopped writing? No! I’m leaving, that wont change. Wont = won't. That was the only mistake, the rest of this was velly good!

Yup, they do, Nutty. :D Thin and humpbacked, but still cows... they're usually white with drooping horns. Ta everyone for commenting! :D

Good! WD said the main stuff, so yeah, this was verra good! :D

Good, but a bit cliched.

Its very good, this!

Whats with the brackets? It sounds confusing, so maybe its a good poem? :?

Nah, this aint cheesy! It's good! If it was cheese or fluff then Id say so, cos I hate both. Cant do a proper ntpk now, but one thing i ...

Someone said that you should put your best on here - not your worst. Sure, do a rewrite if you think it needs it. :D

S'cute. S'nice. Nuff zed. Nix itayall. I like the last line, and the rhyming (ryhming - swell!) went nicely. Listen to the Vogon that it's a good poem.

Thank you for reading! I'll try and edit accordingly...

*blinks* Lummy. Dramatic. Very well writ and all. :D Nicely put, you write the emotion very well.