Twit

oh wow

im a thorough fish

Thank you for reading it! I'm touched (and sad because of the subject) that it managed to strike a chord.

Thank you for your review! It was very helpful and thorough, and I'll keep it in mind for when I edit. I think some of your questions are answered in ...

Thank you! Yes, that first line was bugging me, so I'm glad for your comment on it. :)

Thank you for the kind review! And, yes, totes English. ^_^

Ok I went back and you do say that it's New York City, which clarifies stuff more. I'm stupid and clueless, sorry. >_< But I am wondering why the M/C ...

I also like the growing friendship between Lucian and Juliana. It's going nice and slowly so I can appreciate it more, and it's sweet to see them overcoming their initial ...

People like me with too much time on their hands. ;) I'm not saying I thought she did have loads of arms, just that that's what it sounded like. Ambiguous ...

Mmkay, so I can't go back and edit something else in. >_< But if you aren't continuing this, if this is a short story, I'd like more of an idea ...

Thanks for the reviews, people!

Blink, you should do that, and then post the transcript of your telephone conversation. XD

The sky was the color of Pepto-Bismol that summer evening. My friend Bailey and I sat on the curb of her street outside of her house. Our favorite song was ...

question # 1: Does this paragraph make any since? I guess you could say we were two shirts tossed into a cat filled room. Each individual cat hair was like ...

The Prestige by Christopher Priest Forrest Gump by Winston Groom Leave it to Psmith by PG Wodehouse The novelisation of Ladyhawke by Joan Vinge, I think?