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Skinssssicle. Where’s my Shetland pony? I want a pony. I shall name him Frodo. Or Bill. Or Alfred. By the time I’ve been trudging home for ten minutes, I start ...

Skinsuit, this is my design. I’m falling asleep on my keyboard, so this will have to be short. Ish. "The problem is that if I'd bought the pink one, I ...

Hello, my Skinsuit. Sometimes I’ll be standing somewhere and realise that everyone around me will be dead one day. I’m glad it’s not just me that has these thoughts. As ...

Hi mucho! I apologise in advance if my comments seem harsh—I’m not trying to be mean, and this isn’t trolling or abuse, just what I hope is constructive criticism. As ...

Hi ShadowWriter! First off, this is really long. It’s much less intimidating if you split this up into sections, like Chapter 1 Part 1 and Chapter 1 Part 2. ^_^ ...

Hi Ben! I’m really sorry this has taken so long—uni work has very efficiently been eating away at my brain. Up until recently, I was the one everyone referred to ...

Hi Dude! “W-What?” Juliana turned to her right to see a man running towards her with a large basket full of apples. The fruit had a variety of autumn colors, ...

Hi Dude! Juliana lifted the lantern up with both hands to light the road. Flows better without the ‘up’. He began to hum a familiar tune to her. Flows better ...

Hi kais! This was very sweet, and there was a lot of detail that made it into a interesting story. Your dialogue was good, and your overall writing style was ...

Hi Kafka! It caught my eye—spark, lingering. As a first line, this could be better. The first part grabs the attention, but “spark, lingering” doesn’t sound right. It needs an ...

Hi Indieeloise! Sorry this has taken a while to get to. Gone, but never forgotten - in honor of the twenty flowers who entered heaven’s gates December 14, 2012. This ...

Hi CaptainFinick! I adore Sherlock Holmes, so the title immediately grabbed my attention. I’ve written a few Sherlock Holmes stories focussing on the Irregulars, and I keep on meaning to ...

Hey Lycando! The room was dark , and cold. No comma. This wasn't right, to be locked up in a room, all four walls bearing in on me, I had ...

Hi Dude! Radi did not make for an easy audience however, and he demanded silence as he read over the details of his draft notice yet again. Nitpicky, but this ...

Hey Vyper! I should probably add a caveat--I'm not the best at poetry and haven't reviewed it in ages, so this is all going to be very subjective. Jingle bells, ...