TwistedMuffins

HI! I'm JT, and here and ready to review your work! Innocent little kitten, that's what they said, for to them that's who she is. Just a plain country girl- ...

HAAALLLLOOO~~ (Bear with me, I've eaten chocolate. CHOCOLATTEE~~~~) Beauty is...the life that you live; This is more of a personal thing I guess, but I think you should give a ...

Well hello. Hm, it could just be me, but I didn't think the poem had anything to do with the title. Except for the wet fish part. It did cross ...

Hey there! JT here! Okay, so, you didn't have any Captials. Sure, it gives the poems a soft melody, and gives it the mood this poem requires. But also, it ...

Hey there! Well, I'm not sure how you've learned to do "Diary Entries" but I've learnt it like this: Date: Time: Dear Diary, Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah ...

Hey, I'm here as requested. Well, I could have said everything there is too. You know, nitpick and all, but I see the above readers have already done that. Just ...

Lakshmi! Nice poem! Just one thing : '' some say, 'when you love, you're in the air'' It should be, 'when you're in love,' Also, since you made a rhyming ...

Hey there! First paragraph, first line: 'kinda' won't work, love. Either 'kind of' or chuck the word and think of something else, 'I am such a fool and lame' from ...

Oh wow. Seriously good! First paragraph, second line: it should be 'just like a toy'. I love the second paragraph! Very orignal. Now, all the other paragraphs excluding 3 and ...

You're baacccckk~ you are, na? Anyways, your poem! Since my phone sucks, I won't be able to quote anything, so yay for you. First paragraph, fourth line. It should be ...

Hey there! I, actually kind of think that this is more of a song that a poem. Post this in the Lyrics section ^^ Okay, so nitpicks~ Somewhere I see ...

Hey there! I love you're concept but (Oh darn. Sorry ->) its a little old. Its been done alot. So lets see if you're poem forgives and covers up your ...

Hello~ Haven't read the other version, but I shall comment on this one. For you are the wind, The moon, rain and sun. And the journey for you, Has only ...

Right! "Review Time With JT" starts now~~~~ (xD) Say anything to get you to stop and stair me dead in eye. Stare* "Jenny , H ow is your mom doing?" ...

Hey! It was a really good song! I was actually humming it (I would have sung it, but if I did, my sister would kick me out of the room ...