TwistedMuffins

Hi there! Okay, so it's been like, two weeks since I've last reviewed, so this may be a little -erm- raw, if you get what I mean. Pointers: Okay, so, ...

Oh! I really liked this! The imagery, as MeganWeaver said, is beautiful and absolutely brilliant. I really don't know what to criticize on, since it all seems so prefect! Since ...

Hi! Now, um, I not really sure how to review this because of its shortness, but I shall try anyway. 1. Puntuation. Red marks for the need of capitalization, blue ...

Heylo! Well, truthfully saying, I didn't quite get the poem. And, I'm saying this as a poet myself. So, just to get it clear, there is this girl and this ...

Hey there. Twilight? Dx Oh, dear. Anyhoo, I think you've attempted to write in present-tense, but they were quite a lot of times when your tenses jumped from the past ...

Heya Mikko! Song-writing eh? Hm, not exactly my area, but I shall try and give my best. Nitpick: Now, what I saw missing was the lack of fullstops when there ...

Hey there! So, it was a really good poem, but it kind of gave me the feel of an Eminem rap xD Now, I agree with the person above me, ...

Hey there! This is really good! :D Just one nitpick: You don't always have to start a new line with a capital. Only if the previous sentence ended with a ...

Hi! I really don't know what to say about this exactly, since it's just all one stanza. But, so far, what you have written is really good! Why don't you ...

Hi! Right, so far, everything was fine except for the spacing. After every comma, fullstop, or quotation marks, leave some space. It becomes easier to read, really. Now, when someone ...

AKU! Yes! You posted this poem! ^^ Right, so, nitpicks: '' What is death?'', I ask. "The end of life. The perishing of a body. The traveling of a soul ...

Oh, wow. There was so much depth and feeling in this poem, it touched the reader. Nine Eleven was a horrible, horrible day. I do not live in the U.S. ...

Ah.May.Zing!

Hello TheShadowDancer! I'm going to review your work "The Shadow Dancer" xD Lame, yes, moving on. I am- A dancer of tales, a spinner of dreams I wonder- If in ...

(Oh yes! A poem, finally!) Hello! Right, so, nitpicks! To me, cannot a day be saved? A day, a moment, to be un-enslaved? I think it would be better to ...