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It started off a little bit hilarious, with the Oliver and ben not having any idea why Cara's mad. I still don't get what the wizard intended or why he'd ...

I feel like crying right now but I assure you it's tears of joy. I have to hand it to you, when it comes to action, you can really put ...

Woah, this is too good. Finally so many questions that had been circulating in my have been answered. I thought I'd be relieved but I'm not. I'll tell you why ...

Hey, sorry to take a while but now that I'm done reading all three, I am really starting to like this story. I haven't read one like it before and ...

Hi, Twinkle here to review. I must say I'm really into this story from the start. Although you started off a little roughly. The starting was good but here's what ...

Alrighty, Twinkle here to review again. This was a slow and informative chapter which I enjoyed a whole lot. It was interesting as well as entertaining. I like how you ...

Woah, way to go with everything! This is too amazing, I'm not sure where to start. First of all, I really liked the way you displayed the emotions that Jason ...

I think my face just turned white as I read. This is too intense! It's so real, the way you narrate everything, your showing skills are incredible, it's too good. ...

I really liked this. the action scenes hooked me to the story from the start. As I've told you before, in each chapter, I start liking Ryan's character a lot ...

Hey, I really liked reading this. It was simple yet affective. I like the imagery you've used here. describing the girl's confidence as a cocoon. That was something new and ...

Hi, here to review, or mostly comment. What I love about this the most is the intensity, the atmosphere of fear. Not that I get scared of the dark a ...

Hi, just here to leave my thoughts about it. I have to tell you that I was literally sitting in the same position, not moving at all, while reading this. ...

Hi, this does seem like it's one of the best short stories. Your narration brings out the emotions that the girl feels. The way you showed her playing the piano, ...

Hi, I'm here to review. I should start by saying that I think you did a really good job here. At the start, however, it was a bit confusing. I ...

This leaves me feeling part scared while partly sad. Don't get me wrong though, I loved it all through out. The emotions were just so deep, and pure and it ...