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TrueFantasy

  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Voice that Lies

    Hi there! True here for a review. This is a very powerful poem and touches something very personal. Most of your lines are one sentences but I think some should ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Kemp

    Hi there! True here for a review. This is a very interesting story and I enjoyed your style of writing. You have written in Katy's perspectives with the addition of ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: my past is a museum

    Hi there! True here for a review! This is such a well thought out review and I really liked how you compared the past as a museum. This poem tells ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dear No Offenser

    TrueFantasy here for a review! This is a very relatable poem which is always a good thing. And what I also liked is the ending where you complained about the ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: For sale, one lifetime, poor condition.

    Hi there! I'm a huge fan of science fiction based writing so this work definitely drew my attention. Because you have created a slightly different and unfamiliar world, perhaps you ...

    Mar 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    Hi there! This is such a beautiful poem and it left a smile on my face :) I have never looked at a rainbow in this way but now, whenever ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Fading Colors

    Hi Zee6, I really enjoyed reading your writing and it definitely makes me want to read the next chapter. The characters are interesting and I respect your detailed description of ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Counting Stars

    Hi there, just like many others I have been drawn into your writing simply because the title sung in my head. Although this poem is fairly short, it still manages ...

    Mar 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The thing about dying.

    Hi! This is my first review ever so this should be interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed this writing very much, it's different to other pieces I've read. I found it intriguing ...

    Sep 30, 2013


Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.
— Rumi