Triskiller

Thanks for the review, it's appreciated! :)

Thank you for the review, it's very much appreciated! :)

This is really sweet and very well written. I have really nothing else to say but: Keep writing!

This is a really good poem, I like it very much!

Thank you very much for the review, appreciate it. :)

Quick review: Love this. Like the way it looks, love what's inside of it. It's short but sweet, very nice.

Thank you both very much! :D

Thanks for the comments, appreciate it. Yeah, the punctuation seems to be an issue with a lot of people, so I'll fix that in my future poetry. :)

Thank you for the review, appreciate it. I'll change the eight line stanza into two four line stanza. :)

Fulfilled in this case basically means that their death is the fulfillment of their duty, it's to paint a grim picture of the harsh reality of these wars. I agree ...

Thank you very much for the review, again. I like your reviews because you actually give me something to work with, some things to fix, and you also tell me ...

To all of you, first of all: Thank you very much for reviewing this poem, I appreciate it very much. The punctuation is indeed the off, thanks for pointing that ...

Very interesting format, love the way you personalize the sound of gunfire with short emotional remarks in between. It blends humanity with the machine and makes for a very interesting ...

Thank you very much for the comment, I think you are right, leaving out "and" gives it just that bit more power. Thank you!

Thank you very much. This means a lot to me. :D