Published October 21, 2010
I know the title sounds cliché but I think the poem is anything but. I hope you all agree.
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Good work. The poem was very intense. I was hooked immediately by your first line and kept wamtimg to read. Excellent vernacular and figurative language. It was intruiging and deep and I was brought to tears reading it. Keep it up.
Thank you very much. This means a lot to me.
I really liked this. It wasn't too much, or too little. It was really good and keep up the nice writing.
-Angie.
It was a really good poem. I liked it. My only complaint is punctuation. My favorite line would be "I didn't know the you who diedI knew the you before" Great job.
Keep writing.
~Dannielle~
Heartfelt yet engaging.
I'm working on the same idea so I was able to relate tremendously.
Good job. Keep it up!