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Hey again! Thought I'd try to get a couple of reviews in before Review Day winds up! There's not all that much that really leapt out at me in this ...

Hey again! Back for more... Okay, so I thought that these were broadcasts but now I'm thinking no, that they're journal entries? I guess that means you can maybe ignore ...

Hey jumpingsheep! Finally made it to review your chapter here. You've got a few reviews already, so I'll try to keep my review on this chapter from repeating what's already ...

Hey Bella! Review time... Another really good chapter. I think that this chapter was one of the better-paced ones you've had. It all progressed very naturally and logically, which made ...

Hey again! One more chapter after this, and I'll be caught up, yay! I really did enjoy this chapter, much more so than the previous. It's the first time in ...

Hi again. Here for another review. I'll admit, this certainly wasn't my favourite chapter. There were some moments that I liked, and stood out, but on the whole I think ...

Hey Lavvie. So sorry it's taken me so long to get to reviewing this. Hopefully I'll be able to catch up with this story. Okey dokey. For me, it felt ...

Hello again! I don't have all that much to say about this chapter. It felt a bit rough in parts, but generally the roughness was on the sentence scale, with ...

Hey again. On my phone, so please excuse any typos/weird auto corrects. It keeps.wanting to add an r to Sola. Once again, the contrast between Sola and Rhia's voices is ...

Hey Flite. I know you said you weren't sure whether you were going to keep going with this story, but I've been meaning to review this for weeks now and ...

Me again! I'll just get right into my review, shall I? Pacing was good here, everything progressed nicely, without the bouncing about of ideas that cropped up in chapter one. ...

Hey Scar. :) I was trawling through the LMS forums looking for something to review and I saw this in the Week One submissions thread, and I thought I'd give ...

Hello again! Back for more :) Okay, so this feels very different to the previous chapter. Which, in itself, is not a bad thing. Shows you can create different narrative ...

Hey Lavvie! Here to review your chapter. Review Day, yay! This was quite nice to read. It had a lovely perfect for curling up with on a cold winter-y day ...

Hi Flite! I thought I'd drop by with a review, as a thanks for your awesome review of PS. And I'm glad I did - this is looking good so ...