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Hey HolographicLadybug! I noticed that you had a few chapters of this in the Green Room, so I thought I'd drop by with a review this fine Review Day. I've ...

Me again! So the "date" of this chapter's actually my birthday, so that's kind of cool. Anyway, on with the review... Much of what I've said regarding the dialogue in ...

Hey hyper! I saw the second part of this in the Green Room, so I thought I'd review both parts of it. The title of this piece is what drew ...

Hey Steggy! I'm not sure whether you're still going with this story, but I thought I'd review anyway since I've reviewed the previous two chapters and it seems weird not ...

Two reviews in the one day? What is this sorcery? Hey again Bella. Here's the review part two. I think there was a nice difference in the voices between this ...

Hey Bella! Here's a review for you on this kinda cloudy Friday. Okay, so I don't watch Criminal Minds (which is what this one's based off, I'm pretty sure you ...

Hey again janarose! Finally made it around to chapter two! I have to say, I thought that this chapter was considerably stronger than the previous one - in the nicest ...

Hey there janarose! Welcome to YWS! Just thought I'd drop by with a review. I'm a little rusty with reviewing, so if I start rambling or something at some point ...

Hey again! Thought I would drop by for a Review Day review! Another interesting chapter you've got here. Sone thoughts: Try ti be consistent in the type if language that ...

Hey Stegs! I saw this and I knew I had to review it because last year (and the start of this year) I too wrote a story which mentioned a ...

Hey there! Thought I'd drop by with a review. I really liked what you were trying to do with this story. It's a super cool concept, and while I think ...

Hey again! I think I've got time for one last review (which I think I said last time but whatever). Let's get into it. The whole 'wandering' thing sat a ...

Still an hour left of review day, so here's another review for you. Chapter six already! Something I've noticed in the last couple of chapters is that occasionally you're a ...

It's been a long time since I've gone on a reviewing spree like this. But surprise, it's me again. :) Another really strong chapter. I found very little to fault ...

Hello again! I think this was your strongest chapter so far. Really hoping things keep improving at this rate, this is turning into something pretty cool. For me, this is ...