TriSARAHtops

Hello again love! Boy, oh boy, this chapter was so much better than the first, and if you keep improving at this rate, you're going to be absolutely phenomenal by ...

Hello! Here I am to review! I am really fascinated by your premise so far, and think that this story could go some really great places. I'll start with the ...

Hello! Here to review. You're off to a pretty interesting start so far with this story, and there was a lot I liked about it. Firstly though, I have a ...

HELLO! This was a really interesting piece to read, and I'm glad I found it. There's a bit to say about it, and I'll start with the quibbles: Evangeline could ...

Heya! TriSARAHtops here for a review! This was a short but sweet story. I've found a few quibbles to point out, then I'll get into a more holistic critique. He ...

Hey there! Here to review as requested. Just a warning, I'm not the best at poetry reviews so this could be a whole lotta garble on my part. I will ...

Heya clecverclogs! This was a pretty relatable story for me (although it would probably be a book in my case) and it was a nice fun read. I can see ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this - it was a whole lot of fun. I'll elaborate on that in a moment, but first I had a couple of quibbles: ...

Yay! This cahpter's finally up! :-) And it's just as good as what has gone before. In fact, I'd probably say it's better. These chapter just felt a little more ...

Hi! This piece was very strong, and thoroughly deserving of high praise. I found no major faults with it, but I thought that I'd start by addressing a couple of ...

Hello! TriSARAHtops here to review. I thought I'd start with a few quibbles I had with this piece: He had no idea howto talk or what to talk to the ...

Hi there! How about a review? I enjoyed reading this piece. I'll get into talking about it properly, but I'd like to point out some quibbles first. On the whole, ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this piece. You had a style of writing that really suited it, and I could really see that a lot of thought had gone ...

Hey steward! (Finally) here as requested! :-) A really beautiful, heartbreaking piece. Before I get into the praise, I just had a tiny quibble: says Sophie's father, then Sophie cries ...

Hi lostthought! Here as requested - sorry it's taken so long! :-) Thought I'd start with the quibbles. Most of them have already been pointed out, and the only one ...