TreeHugger12

Its sorta okay I guess... But I liked it. The repetition of the word alone didn't click with me. Neither did the fourth stanza. But I like the message. But, ...

You're right I kinda did think it was like that too XD... AS for the glitches, I'll get them tomorrow. I'm getting sleepy already, it's one in the morning here. ...

Interesting poem you've got here. Well, I don't venture into poetry often so I don't think I should critique or anything. But I really think that this is great stuff! ...

Honestly, I didn't think anyone would like this. So... thanks! Oh and I did use to write poetry, but I think I stink at that too. But I tried again ...

^Jenth: Nah, I think I do need a little harshness, I haven't been taking this seriously enough. ^Writingspitfire: I really appreciate your review, and thanks for all the time you've ...

Thanks PenNPaper... I had just started to think maybe I'm a thread killer.... T_T I had already edited it before you posted so I want you to comment on it ...

Liked it a lot. :) Hope you keep up the great work!

Nobody's commented yet.... hmmm... o_o

Oh, okay. Thanks once again! :DD

I loved it. It was really great. You have several mistakes in your spelling but all in all, I think that you've done an excellent job.

How will I do that? Like delete the old posts or something? I'm not sure I know how to fix it up...

How will I do that? Like delete the old posts or something?

Oh yeah, forgot about that. You see, for such a long time this story has been in storage. Ven was first called man in the original and it was a ...

Writingspitfire: She was walking because she couldn't fly with a broken wing. Thanks for the comments guys!

Thanks for the tips by the way. :)