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Re: Lost - Prologue (Improved) and Chapter 1.A
Hi there! I'm not great at introductions so let's jump right in. :) I don't have that much time so this will probably be a super quick review, just a ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Short Story Place Description
Hello there! I'm not that great at introductions so let's jump right in. First, the main thing I like about this little tidbit of a story. The worldbuilding is excellent, ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: ADFA in 300 words
Hiya! I'm not great with introductions so let's jump right in. I don't have a lot of time, and this passage is pretty short, so I'll just write a short ...
Jan 13, 2018 -
Re: Generation Z's Biggest Problem...
Hi there! I'm not great at introductions so let's hop right in! I just wanna say that this is a great little article you've written here! I've dealt with suicidal ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: u brok mi harte
I don't have much time nor do I have much to say, so I'll make this quick. Well, this was an interesting little poem here. I'm going to assume that ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Depression
Hi! I'm bad at introductions so let's jump right in. I really only have one small complaint with this story, and that's with the commas. Firstly, there should be a ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Exit monologue (for a situationship)
Hey! I'm not very good with introductions so let's jump right in. Ok, this is less of a review and more some things I really like about your story because ...
Dec 4, 2017 -
Re: Death and the Hypochondriac
Hi! I'm bad at introductions so let's hop right in. First off, I don't have any real complaints with this story, this is less of a review and more of ...
Dec 3, 2017 -
Re: a part of a longer story, maybe book?
Very interesting! I'm interested in seeing if this becomes a fully fledged story or not, it certainly has potential. Keep in mind, this is less of a review and more ...
Dec 3, 2017 -
Re: I don't know
Hello. :) I'm bad at introductions so let's jump right in. First off, I actually really like the concept of this story, it's very interesting to me. I'm curious to ...
Nov 26, 2017
