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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: Lost - Prologue (Improved) and Chapter 1.A

    Hi there! I'm not great at introductions so let's jump right in. :) I don't have that much time so this will probably be a super quick review, just a ...

    Jan 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Short Story Place Description

    Hello there! I'm not that great at introductions so let's jump right in. First, the main thing I like about this little tidbit of a story. The worldbuilding is excellent, ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: ADFA in 300 words

    Hiya! I'm not great with introductions so let's jump right in. I don't have a lot of time, and this passage is pretty short, so I'll just write a short ...

    Jan 13, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: Generation Z's Biggest Problem...

    Hi there! I'm not great at introductions so let's hop right in! I just wanna say that this is a great little article you've written here! I've dealt with suicidal ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: u brok mi harte

    I don't have much time nor do I have much to say, so I'll make this quick. Well, this was an interesting little poem here. I'm going to assume that ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Depression

    Hi! I'm bad at introductions so let's jump right in. I really only have one small complaint with this story, and that's with the commas. Firstly, there should be a ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Exit monologue (for a situationship)

    Hey! I'm not very good with introductions so let's jump right in. Ok, this is less of a review and more some things I really like about your story because ...

    Dec 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Supernatural Re: Death and the Hypochondriac

    Hi! I'm bad at introductions so let's hop right in. First off, I don't have any real complaints with this story, this is less of a review and more of ...

    Dec 3, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a part of a longer story, maybe book?

    Very interesting! I'm interested in seeing if this becomes a fully fledged story or not, it certainly has potential. Keep in mind, this is less of a review and more ...

    Dec 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: I don't know

    Hello. :) I'm bad at introductions so let's jump right in. First off, I actually really like the concept of this story, it's very interesting to me. I'm curious to ...

    Nov 26, 2017


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings