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Re: I Never Forgot You, Ever
Thank you so much for the review; its an amazing feeling when the reader understands completely what I am talking about in my poetry :) Thanks again
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: I Never Forgot You, Ever
Sorry I was meant to take out the capitalised words or the semicolons, and thank you :D
Apr 25, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
Thank you for the review and very long reply in which I am only just writing. Thank you your compliments, and thank you for understanding why I used "soaked," :). ...
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
Thank you for the review and very long reply in which I am only just writing. Thank you for your kind words I appreciate it. I would like to know ...
Apr 16, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
Thanks for the comment :) and yeah I do understand what you were saying, that soaked it usually used for things that are wet, but I really wanted the reader ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
I think you misunderstood a lot of the metaphors that I used. Saying something like 'covered with dust' is completely cliche, everyone has heard it and it isn't original. By ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Moonlight
Thanks for the review ^.^ Glad that you liked it :) Sorry about my spelling error, I always seem to leave one in. And as for the big words, I ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: I wasnt ready...
In your peom you spelled 'around' as aoroud :)
Mar 14, 2013 -
Re: Moonlight
That was a great review thank you :') Glad that you liked the poem and the words that I used :D I spend a lot of time picking the right ...
Mar 13, 2013 -
Re: Moonlight
Thank you for the review Helen, its always nice to see that I've done okay haha I love using metaphors, and i always stay away from the cliche ones, I ...
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Moonlight
Damn ill have to correct that, and smog is a a gassy kind of poisonous or polluted smoke :) And thank you :')
Mar 12, 2013 -
Re: Sudden Discomfort
Thanks for the review, I feel like I didn't really succeed here at all now, I really need to go back and think about each line of each stanza and ...
Mar 11, 2013 -
Re: Sound Of Silence
I have just reviewed 'the painter' and I'm back reading more of your brilliance. Another amazing poem with perfect flow. I am a true fan of your work, it seems ...
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: Sudden Discomfort
Thank you so much for your kind words, I was worried when I first started reading your message but then was pleasantly surprised, like you were haha. And yes, I ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Sinking into another night
I really enjoyed your poem but i generally don't like to criticize xD If I don't understand something, I tend to think that is more my error not yours, or ...
Mar 9, 2013
