ToritheMonster

Hi there! So; I'll be honest, I wasn't crazy about this poem. The very first stanza was okay. I like the mental image of a daffodil path. However, you punctuation ...

(Was it bad of me to go perusing the back pages? I loves this one.) Hey there! So; I decided to look at page 237; and after the creepy year ...

Hi! So, I liked your first paragraph or two. It was an interesting, funny metaphor. After that, it went downhill; until I simply couldn't bring myself to read any more ...

I actually really liked this! Initially reading it, I was a tad shaky on the repetition of "I wish I was beautiful." However, in the end, it really drove the ...

So, this is almost unreviewable because of the bad grammar and such; but I'll give you my impressions anyway. So, looking past the blue font, notably easy-to-catch mistakes, and 'I's ...

Hey! I actually really liked this. Kinda a kick in the face to that drunken Drew guy- who was obviously a douc... er, not nice person. This was simple, but ...

Yoyo! Tori here. So; this poem didn't strike me as anything special or original. Just another sad break-up poem. Been there; done that. You had a consistent rhyme scheme, though, ...

I really liked this poem! You have a few little nitpicks that you can catch just reading it over a few times. However, I really loved it overall. It rings ...

Okay, Tori here! I apologise in advance for the harsh review. Take it with a grain of salt. So; I didn't like this poem. The purple and bold and italics ...

So, this is far too lengthy for a nitpick review; but I didn't really have any nitpicks. So it's okay. Overall; this is a very good poem! I love your ...

Ha, as I was reading this, I thought 'Gee, this sounds like a Lady Gaga type song.' and then I read the spoiler. So, overall, this isn't a bad poem. ...

I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOO gay for Villanelles. Erm. Ditto.... Anyway, this is a good villanelle. Usually they're hellish to write and even more difficult to do well. However, I think you ...

Hello, m'dear. Tori here for some honest reviewing. First, some basic fixes in red . As I look down to see the scar engraved into my pale skin, A I ...

Hello, m'dear, Tori here. Let's get right to it. So, I didn't like this poem. It really just sounded like a stereotypical emo poem to me. Now, don't get me ...

This poem is actually very good, but the repetition of 'she is' is very daunting. It makes your eyes hurt and I almost didn't read it because it looked so..... ...