ToriLynnea

Thank you so very much! I'm so thrilled that you liked it! I know that I cried when I wrote it...and I liked learning about the haulocaust...but at the same ...

Thank you for your comments! It means so much to me that y'all like my writing! :)

Thank you for informing me of that! I fixed it! and thank you so much for your input! you have no idea how much it means to me!

i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...

i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...

i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...

i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...

This is a very good poem. I like the way you used sound and imagery. I didn't see errors, but don't take my word for it though... i'm not very ...

That is a little sad! :( but very good at writing! :)

Very nice! :) you're a good writer!