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Re: Vibrant Longing
i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...
Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:58 pm -
Re: A Note For a Date
i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...
Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:58 pm -
Re: Conflict
i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...
Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:57 pm -
Re: Ashes and Shards
i like the use of varying sentance lengths. you used alot of "advanced" words something i dont see in works very often. you seem to know what you"re doing and ...
Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:57 pm -
Re: The Champ
This is a very good poem. I like the way you used sound and imagery. I didn't see errors, but don't take my word for it though... i'm not very ...
Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:52 pm