TonelessBard

Well, that was the most encouraging review I ever got. Thank you! :)

I didn't understand.

Huh?

I'm glad it is. It's so damn unfortunate.

I was just wondering when something like this would end up on the literary spotlight. Too bad talented poets don't end up here.

Don't feel stupid, it is important what the poem means to you, how you interpret it, not how everyone interprets it.

Punctation is always my problem :D Thank you once again!

Thank you! Yes, that is actually a song. Recorded! Yes, in that third stanza I'm refering to God in which I don't really believe (I'm agnostic). So there's a lot ...

I'd usually be "Scumbag Steve" and press "Yes" on "Is this a review?" button, but I guess I don't have anything to say about your poem. It's perfect this way, ...

Thanks! Yes, the italicized part is the chorus, and the song has a veeeeeery slow tempo, that's why it's so short :D

I don't know. Maybe it will happen... I guess now it's not the time, but who knows... :3

This is beautiful. Simple, short, but incredibly beautiful poem. They should ban reviews for the things like this :D. Nice AABB rhyme and good structure, that's what I like to ...

Thanks for noticing my mistakes, It's edited now. I truly am blind, but not painter :D

This is... wow. This poem is like drug for my eyes, especially the ending. It happens when life becomes pain in the ass. I'd love to read more from you, ...

Hello there! I find your poem very interesting. It's an awesome display of feelings bursting right into the inspiration, we all have that. The only thing that I would change ...