TolyVilapoo

Solz! You've done it again. Written something hilarious, entertaining and undoubtedly brilliant! Loved every line of it. Made me wonder if my parents are actually stalkers now. Hehe. Great work ...

HEY!!!! I finally found some time! Hmm what can I say? I liked the idea of the poem, it was much like the first one, though this was did not ...

hey It's Toly here to review... and the first one too!! hehe I watched as another man fell beneath "beneath." alone does't sound all that right, you could say, "beneath ...

Tanya:) Here for a review hehe. Mama, wake up! “Mama, wake up.” Jasmine peered over the handle bars keeping her mama safely tucked in bed. She couldn’t see her Mama’s ...

Hey The name alone just thrilled me, the contents just blew me!! Humans are way to predictable... I say that like I'm some sort of alien lol. I enjoyed the ...

Wow this story was just amazing. Enjoyed it completely! Has immense potential! The story line was great, and the climax, GREAT! I can see this as an unbelievable novel with ...

Hey I liked this poem quite a bit, just i felt that at times there were a little inconsistencies, but not in the poem it self but rather you writing. ...

Hey loved the imagery in this poem. the way you've portrayed the dolls emotions just wonderful. Imagery was vivid and clear in my minds eye. lol though at times i ...

Hey... I really enjoyed this poem!!! The best poetry is often the ones we can relate to best, and I'm pretty sure almost every writer can relate to this poem. ...

Hey I must say I enjoyed this piece. the imagery and feelings portrayed by your were just brilliant. Though I felt that now and then it did not flow as ...

Hey I enjoyed the poem from start to finish, your descriptions were brilliant, I could really picture this in my minds eye. Yet in terms of poetry i felt that ...

8ta...lol Hmm first of all your opening was brillinat, it immediatelt caught my attention, and it was due to that opening that I continued to read more. Must say though ...

Hey pal. Lol I like the title introspection, it really is what your poem is all about. Maybe play around with the meaning of introspection and the thoughts you had ...

Heya. . . Hmm interesting storyline. Usually what I do before doing my characters i develop my general story. The best way to start is exactly what you have, a ...

Hi. I feel special being the first person to give you a review. Lol. I must say your storyline is good. Your descriptions of the girls feelings and emotions during ...