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I'm sorry, I have to agree with your friends. I don't like this piece. I feel that it's inappropriate for a "young" writers' society and entirely inappropriate for your age. ...

Thanks for catching that! Glad you liked it :)

I like this, it's fresh, original, and kept my attention. But, please please please use punctuation! "The Seagulls are all a flutter Dancing around on the sand After some fish ...

I decided to rewrite this because I felt it didn't fit in with what I'm trying to write here. But if anyone particularly liked it, you can message me and ...

Thanks so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I do not wish to start an ugly internet fight, so if anyone replies to this, I'm not replying back, sorry. But I would like to say that you are ...

Thanks! Check "Excitement" for part 2, and let me know what you think! :)

I know it prob'ly is confusing, but that was actually part of my intention, to make people see how things appear to a young child. Since young children often miss ...