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Re: Istri Sejati
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I'm going to warn you that I'm on my phone, so there will probably be a ton of spelling/grammar/typing mistakes. First of all, ...
May 5, 2019 -
Re: time passed by
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! First of all, I'm so sorry sorry, I'm doing this on my phone and I'm almost guaranteed to have typos/weird things because I'm ...
May 4, 2019 -
Re: I'll be there
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! First thing I'm going to say is that as much as I love the title, there is actually a song out there with ...
May 3, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 4.4
Hey there! Toboldlygo here with a review. Let's start working on getting this piece out the Green Room, shall we? Well, first of all, thank you for putting a chapter ...
May 3, 2019 -
Re: event of today
Hello there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I think this is another fantastic poem! It's very vague and I think it's a great way to make your reader think about ...
May 3, 2019 -
Re: maybe I am not unhappy
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review and to hopefully help this piece get out of the Green Room. Wow, this is actually a hard one to review. It's so ...
May 3, 2019 -
Re: decay
Hey there! Let's get this out the Green Room, shall we? First of all, I think this is a really neat style of poetry! I'm guessing that you uploaded a ...
May 2, 2019 -
Re: Pensacola Star - 1.2
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's work on getting this piece out of the Green Room, shall we? My first impression was, "what was she not supposed to ...
May 2, 2019 -
Re: Insanity
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I must say, this is really good! I was a little confused at first and then it seemed to clear itself up, so ...
May 2, 2019 -
Re: Are You Proud Of Me?
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this out the Green Room. :) This is an awesome piece! I'm going to call attention to a couple specifics and ...
May 2, 2019 -
Re: Still Remember
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! My first question is, is this a poem or song lyrics or what's going on here? Overall, it's a really great piece, but ...
May 1, 2019 -
Re: [DELETED]
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review. First of all, I do like the morals you put into it. We absolutely should be thinking about good parenting and remembering that ...
May 1, 2019 -
Re: Esperanto Translation - La Bildo de Dorian Grey, Oscar Wilde
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review. Let's get this out the Green Room, shall we? First, a disclaimer: I don't speak Esperanto. Unfortunately, I can't be much help to ...
May 1, 2019 -
Re: Wings- Chapter 2
Hey there! Great chapter! This is a really neat story! I'm really excited to see what the deal with these wings is, as in, why are people so upset that ...
May 1, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 6.2
Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review and to help get this lovely piece out of the Green Room. :) Outside of the piece itself, I notice that the other ...
May 1, 2019
