ToSaferHarbours

Thank you for your great feedback! I'm glad those lines had that calming effect; that's what I was hoping for! I'm thinking that I said hot because, like you said,it ...

Thanks for your review! I'll definitely change around the sentences; a lot of them don't make sense, haha! And I'll cut out the tuna ... that was really kind of ...

I'm so sorry about the formatting; I copied and pasted the poem so I think that might have messed it up o.O I see about that stanza ... I always ...

Thank you so much for your review! I see what you mean about the plot. I will definitely work on that. Thanks again! And I do write poetry, so I'll ...

Thank you so much! I will definitely work on developing the background more :)

Thank you so much! It's only like my second/third draft and there are lots of things I want to fix :) Thank you so much again! :D

I certainly shall! Just send me the link or whatever and I'll look at it as soon as I can :)

No problem! :) I hope that wasn't too much xD I just wanted to be thorough :D

Thank you so much for your review! And ya, I have broken it up in my docs now :) I can see what you mean about "that sunset." xD I'll ...

Thank you so your review! And for your suggestion, I'll definitely use that :)

No problem! And great work :D Keep writing; you have lots of talent! :)

Oh, I'm very sorry that my review submitted twice :(

Cute story! You had some really nice descriptions :) There were a few grammar and punctuation errors, so I'll try to point out a few I noticed. ~ “'Auntie this ...

Oh okay. I understand :) I just thought it could be really great and profound if someone said it in a story.

Thank you so much for your review :) For that part that you mentioned, I can see what you mean. I'll think about that one and try to improve it ...