TinyDancer

Thanks for the insight

Thanks for the suggestions! I'll play with the structure a bit when I have time.

Thank you! Your review made my day :) ~Jess

Thank you so much for your kind word. Just knowing that someone else has felt the same as I do and can relate to this piece makes me feel a ...

Thank you for your lovely review :) I really appreciate your compliments and I will fix that error as soon as I can. ~Jess

Hi :) thank you!

It's not the beginning to a story. It's just a flashback I had from my childhood the other day while listening to Pink Floyd. And yeah it's a real song. ...

So you say you don't want a review. Am I allowed to just comment, then? I read this and thought "It's so pretty, I just HAVE to comment" because like ...

Thank you so much! Yeah, the person it's about is a player, and dishonest, and is very two-faced (like someone wearing a mask, hence the title). So you're right on ...

Hi there! Thank you so much for the review! I was not expecting such good marks! This piece was definitely a step of faith for me because I've neer written ...

Hi there! Thanks for the review. I do know how to punctuate poetry, but since these are song lyrics (and rather hastily jotted ones at that), I guess I neglected ...

Oh, and as for a title, here are some suggestions: Why I Never Fell in Love with Snow White She Named Me Grumpy Better to Lose than to Love The ...

Hey there everybody-- Just a quick reply to all of you since you all seem to be saying the same thing :) I must defend my case in the lack ...

Creative!! Nice flow and rhythm, unique subject, and witty take. Great job. Not much else to say! I love it :) ~Jess

Hey everybody, thanks so much for your reviews! They mean so much to me :) ~Jess